Monday, January 9, 2017

Videos on Mechanics and Rubrics

Please review the following videos which have terrific writing suggestions:

How To Write an Introduction

How To Use Quotations in a Literary Essay

How To Analyze Literature

The 20 Most Common Grammar Mechanical Errors

Writing a Conclusion

Writing the Body of a Literary Analysis

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RUBRICS

Description
Each essay should be aligned with one of the general or student learning objectives. As written on the syllabus and reviewed the first day of class, these are:

General Learning Objectives of course:
    -History, culture and politics in academic and non-academic settings.
    -The interconnectedness of all knowledge, contemporary and ancestral, from a Kanaka   Maoli perspective.
    -Kanaka Maoli applications, protocols and disciplines.
    -Students can discuss Kanaka Maoli experiences in the context of the world’s indigenous                        people.

Student Learning Outcomes (by list):

Know our genealogical ties to Papahānaumoku, our earth mother, and ko Hawaiʻi paeʻāina as our ancestral homeland.

      To expose students to the Native Voice and how it articulates its relationship to its environment;

      To look at creation narratives in order to generate discussion about genealogy;

      To research the multitudes of environmental phenomena



Kanaka Maoli are one Lāhui connected by our one ancestor Hāloa across nā kai ʻewalu

      To look at works printed from different islands to determine commonality;

      To study religious metaphor in Hawaiian literary texts.



History, Culture, and Politics in academic and non-academic settings:

      To expose students to indigenous literary traditions;

      To decode historic, cultural, and political metaphor in Hawaiian texts;

      To increase familiarity that students can discuss these terms outside of an academic setting;

      To reinscribe Kanaka Maoli literary traditions in Hawaiʻi and abroad.



The interconnectedness of all knowledge, contemporary and ancestral, from a Kanaka Maoli point of view:

      To reterritorialize the Kanaka Maoli literary landscape by studying authentic texts;

       To articulate historic and contemporary models of Hawaiian literature.

      To be able to analyze indigenous, economic, organizational models, assessments, and design.

      To teach students about the different literary forms that exists in the Hawaiian canon.

Length Requirements:
Each student will be responsible for turning in 3-5 page essays (approx. 1250 words each, not including a Works Cited page) on a mutually agreed upon topic. We will spend a great deal of time on working on the technical components of writing and well as logic building. The work will be assessed on the following criteria:

    Excellent work that exceeds assignment guidelines in every regard
    Strong and consistent definition of audience and purpose throughout
    Evidence persuasively and clearly supports argument
    Document is coherent and logically organized
    Style, format, and tone are consistent and appropriate to audience and subject
    Writing is free from all errors

In addition to the length requirement, students were also given a rubric to better understand the expectations expected of them. Your writing exceeded all expectations of the rubric and below is your assessment by category.

CONTENT
Level: Mastery in all fields
THESIS

Easily identifiable, plausible, novel, sophisticated, insightful, crystal clear.
STRUCTURE

Evident, understandable, appropriate for thesis.  Excellent transitions from point to point.  Paragraphs support solid topic sentences.
USE OF EVIDENCE

Primary and secondary source information incorporated to buttress every point.  Examples support thesis and fit within paragraph.  Excellent integration of quoted material into sentences.  Factual information is incorporated.
LOGIC AND ARGUMENTATION

All ideas flow logically; the argument is identifiable, reasonable, and sound.  Author anticipates and successfully defuses counter-arguments; makes novel connections which illuminate thesis
MECHANICS

Language is clearly organized. Correct word usage, punctuation, sentence structure, and grammar; correct citation of sources; no spelling errors; absolutely no run-on sentences or comma splices.

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